tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post4880798954079352015..comments2023-03-28T05:27:10.415-04:00Comments on An Ordinary Japanese Mom's Diary: A fever againMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-58500543716087137712016-07-14T06:23:41.535-04:002016-07-14T06:23:41.535-04:00Hello Kumi-san,
It sounds as if your son had a fu...Hello Kumi-san,<br /><br />It sounds as if your son had a fun time at Karate camp, though it seems to have taken its toll on him in terms of him having a cold.<br /><br />This line:<br />He talked about Karate practice trip to us a lot while having dinner.<br /><br />Should be:<br />He talked about (the/his) Karate practice trip to us a lot while having dinner.<br /><br />This line:<br />I really hope that he will recover it soon and get through the hot summer.<br /><br />Should be:<br />I really hope that he will recover soon and get through the hot summer.<br /><br />Reason: Removed word "it" as it was not needed.Terry Wallworkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175573589082853160noreply@blogger.com