tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post5199234999789003221..comments2023-03-28T05:27:10.415-04:00Comments on An Ordinary Japanese Mom's Diary: Major cleanupMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-87808885869545284892016-01-05T17:41:31.172-05:002016-01-05T17:41:31.172-05:00Thank you Terry.
Golden fish is too funny!
I am so...Thank you Terry.<br />Golden fish is too funny!<br />I am sorry, it was just my mistake.<br />I have already corrected it.<br />Thank you so much!<br /><br /><br />Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-17198202036400658392016-01-03T08:29:45.086-05:002016-01-03T08:29:45.086-05:00Hello Kumi-san,
Sounds like you and your family w...Hello Kumi-san,<br /><br />Sounds like you and your family were very busy getting everything cleaned.<br /><br />Children here are not expected to clean their classrooms but that I think is mainly because of worries about them getting hurt or taking too long.<br /><br />Here is a list of some of the small issues found:<br /><br />This line:<br />Since I took my 5-year-old daughter to the music school lesson yesterday morning, I thought we could start cleaning from the afternoon.<br /><br />Should be:<br />Since I took my 5-year-old daughter to her music school lesson yesterday morning, I thought we could start cleaning from the afternoon.<br /><br />This line:<br />If you watch this now, we will surely miss the best time for major cleanup.<br /><br />Should be:<br />If you watch this now, we will surely miss the best time for cleaning.<br /><br />This line:<br /> Why don't you think that let's finish cleaning while it is sunny and warm?<br /><br />Should be:<br />Don't you think that it would be a good idea to finish cleaning while it is sunny and warm?<br /><br />This line:<br /> Don't you think you want to clean up our house at the end of the year?<br /><br />Should be:<br />Don't you want to do some year end clean up<br /><br />This line:<br />Since I got angry too much, they were surprised at me and turned off the TV.<br /><br />Should be:<br />Since I got a little angry, they were surprised and turned off the TV.<br /><br />This line:<br />My 6-year-old son cleaned the balcony and my 5-year-old daughter wiped the wooden parts of the house, then they cleaned the fish tank for golden fish and wiped the chairs together.<br /><br />Question: are golden fish the little orange colored fishes that look like this:<br /><br />http://www.goldfish-as-pets.com/types_of_goldfish.html<br /><br />If so then golden fish would be written as goldfish. <br /><br />This line:<br />Maybe my son gets used to cleaning because he needs to clean his school every day, and my daughter also knows that we need to clean our house at the end of the year because she joined in the major cleanup at the nursery school.<br /><br />Should be:<br />Maybe my son is used to cleaning because he needs to clean his school every day, and my daughter also knows that we need to clean our house at the end of the year because she joined in with the cleanup at the nursery school.<br /><br />This line:<br />I want to welcome the comfortable and pleasant New Year.<br /><br />Should be:<br />I want to welcome in a comfortable and pleasant New Year.Terry Wallworkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175573589082853160noreply@blogger.com