tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post7232208996238841852..comments2023-03-28T05:27:10.415-04:00Comments on An Ordinary Japanese Mom's Diary: Last minute upgrading for free to Windows10Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-75459247185431791482016-08-24T17:02:05.331-04:002016-08-24T17:02:05.331-04:00Thank you Terry!
In fact, he scceeded to upgrade h...Thank you Terry!<br />In fact, he scceeded to upgrade his laptop to Windows10, but his aim was only to get the program.<br />He tried to downgrade it to Windows7, but it was failed because he set his laptop to dual boot Windows7 and Linax.<br />Now it can't start up.<br />We could copy our important files from the disk, but it has not fixed yet.<br />That's why my husband recently use my laptop.<br />I want him to fix it as soon as possible!<br />Thank you!<br />Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-79008341364938535032016-07-29T11:52:07.793-04:002016-07-29T11:52:07.793-04:00Hello Kumi-san,
I have heard a lot of people comp...Hello Kumi-san,<br /><br />I have heard a lot of people complain about Windows 10. I don't generally run Windows but instead use Linux which suits my needs more closely. However if I needed Windows 10 I think I would buy it rather than get the free version as it offers more control over when it does upgrades of software. I hope your laptop will successfully upgrade to Windows 10 without issues.<br /><br />Here is a list of some of the issues found with the rest of the post:<br /><br />This line:<br />Since our family will go on a family trip from tomorrow, I thought he had to take work home with him to finish it until today.<br /><br />Should be:<br />Since our family will go on a family trip tomorrow, I thought he had to take work home with him to finish it today.<br /><br />Reason: Removed "from" as it is not needed before tomorrow. Also removed "until" as it also is not needed before today.<br /><br />This line:<br />"What are you doing? Go to bed now, or you will be tired before we will go on a trip!"<br /><br />Should be:<br />"What are you doing? Go to bed now, or you will be tired before our trip!"<br /><br />Reason: Changed "we will go on a" to "our trip!"<br /><br />This line:<br />"Because it is progressing slowly. I am trying to upgrade my laptop to Windows10."<br /><br />Should be:<br />"Because I am trying to upgrade my laptop to Windows10 but it is progressing slowly."<br /><br />Reason: Word order changes and added "but" filler word to make sentence sound more natural in English.<br /><br />This line:<br />I wondered why he had not upgrading even though there was an enough upgrading period.<br /><br />Should be:<br />I wondered why he had not upgraded even though there was enough of an (upgrade/upgrading) period.<br /><br />Or:<br />I wondered why he had not (taken/done) the upgrade even though there was enough of an (upgrade/upgrading) period.<br /><br />Reason: Various ways to word the original sentence which sound a little more natural.<br /><br />This line:<br />I don't know whether it will finish with any problems before we go to work.<br /><br />Should be:<br />I don't know whether it will finish without any problems before we go to work.Terry Wallworkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175573589082853160noreply@blogger.com