tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post8064051791754873012..comments2023-03-28T05:27:10.415-04:00Comments on An Ordinary Japanese Mom's Diary: The Scream of cucumberMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-15148085982189773372016-09-25T17:29:32.711-04:002016-09-25T17:29:32.711-04:00Hi Terry.
Thank you for helping me a lot.
After th...Hi Terry.<br />Thank you for helping me a lot.<br />After this, of course I ate the slice of cucumber!Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-44169059973183887932016-09-12T06:25:18.518-04:002016-09-12T06:25:18.518-04:00ello Kumi-san,
I think that it is true what they,...ello Kumi-san,<br /><br />I think that it is true what they, say in Japan food is often considered art :). Here they say that you should not play with your food but they do not mention if it is okay to make art out of it. Still in a lot of countries they having imaginary figures burned onto toast and other such food items. I don't think I have seen a similar equivalent for cucumbers on Ebay however! :)<br /><br />Here is a list of some of the issues found in the rest of the post:<br /><br />This line:<br />When I prepared breakfast, I found the interesting thing.<br /><br />Should be:<br />When I prepared breakfast, I found an interesting thing.<br /><br />This line:<br />I cut a cucumber, then I found the cut end looked like a famous something.<br /><br />Should be:<br />I cut a cucumber, then I found the cut end looked like a something famous.<br /><br />Reason: Word order changes.<br /><br />This line:<br />"Look! Do you think it looks like something?"<br /><br />Could also be reworded as:<br />"Look! Do you think it looks familiar?"<br /><br />This line:<br />He immediately understood what I wanted to say, then he started drawing a picture on a white paper.<br /><br />Could be reworded as:<br />He immediately understood what I wanted to say, then he started drawing a picture on some white paper.Terry Wallworkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175573589082853160noreply@blogger.com