tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post1935649553003828687..comments2023-03-28T05:27:10.415-04:00Comments on An Ordinary Japanese Mom's Diary: A small helperMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-2248007316852202692015-12-17T15:53:24.034-05:002015-12-17T15:53:24.034-05:00Hello Terry.
I corrected the wrong parts.
I apprec...Hello Terry.<br />I corrected the wrong parts.<br />I appreciate your help!Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-61357331646846153972015-12-17T11:52:47.807-05:002015-12-17T11:52:47.807-05:00Hello Kumi-san,
Another interesting article, it i...Hello Kumi-san,<br /><br />Another interesting article, it is always good to learn to cook as early as possible. It is a good skill to have.<br /><br />Very small issues found in the post, I have listed the ones that I found below:<br /><br />This line:<br />She took her own cooking knife which I bought her before.<br /><br />Should be:<br />She took her own cooking knife which I bought for her (use previously or remove before).<br /><br />This line:<br />I had already taught how to cut the vegetables before, but I needed to keep an eye on her yet.<br /><br />Should be:<br />I had already taught her how to cut the vegetables (remove before or instead use previously), but I needed to keep an eye on her yet.<br /><br />This line:<br />"Don't open your left hand. Let your left hand like a cat's hand!"<br /><br />Should be:<br />"Don't open your left hand. Let your left hand be like a cat's hand!"<br /><br />This line:<br />It made me tired than I do it by myself.<br /><br />Should be:<br />It made me (as/more) tired than if I had done it by myself.<br /><br />This line:<br />I hope the day when my daughter can prepare our meal will come in the future!<br /><br />Should be:<br />I hope the day when my daughter can prepare our meals will come in the future!Terry Wallworkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175573589082853160noreply@blogger.com