tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post3030714805202685967..comments2023-03-28T05:27:10.415-04:00Comments on An Ordinary Japanese Mom's Diary: KaraokeMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-63752357715971069442016-06-26T10:02:04.767-04:002016-06-26T10:02:04.767-04:00Hello Kumi-san,
Your children and husband sound a...Hello Kumi-san,<br /><br />Your children and husband sound as if they had a very good time at karaoke. I follow a Japanese karaoke singer on my G+ page that I use to practice Japanese reading and listening with called みーみん. She seems to genuinely enjoy karaoke singing. She uses the JoySound karaoke system I think:<br /><br />https://plus.google.com/111514138499730332181/posts<br /><br />I don't mind listening to people sing Karaoke but I will never sing as my voice is hideous!<br /><br />Here is a list of some of the other issues found with the rest of the post:<br /><br />This line:<br />"Well, for example, anime's song like Doraemon, Kureyon Shin-chan, and so on. Then children's song like Grandfather's clock. Yes, they were so excited to sing it."<br /><br />Should be:<br />"Well, for example, anime songs like Doraemon, Kureyon Shin-chan, and so on. Then children's songs like Grandfather's clock. Yes, they were so excited to sing it."<br /><br />Reason: Made some words plural and made others singular to make sound slightly more natural.<br /><br />This line:<br />He recorded their song, so he played their song for me.<br /><br />Should be:<br />He had recorded their song, so he played it for me.<br /><br />This line:<br />They sang seriously than expected.<br /><br />Should be:<br />They sang more (confidently/seriously) than I expected.<br /><br />This line:<br />"Yeah, it was really fun! I sang the theme song of Doraemon's movie, and the theme song of Kureyon Shin-chan's movie, and..."<br /><br />Should be:<br />"Yeah, it was really fun! I sang the theme song from the Doraemon movie, and the theme song of Kureyon Shin-chan's movie, and..."<br /><br />This line:<br />Their story made me want to go Karaoke!<br /><br />Should be:<br />Their story made me want to go to Karaoke!Terry Wallworkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175573589082853160noreply@blogger.com