tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post4225686594250961185..comments2023-03-28T05:27:10.415-04:00Comments on An Ordinary Japanese Mom's Diary: What do you want to be when you grow up?Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-3042951736697511362015-12-17T16:07:53.488-05:002015-12-17T16:07:53.488-05:00Thank you Terry.
I corrected them.
You do the comp...Thank you Terry.<br />I corrected them.<br />You do the computer graphics design!<br />I have never done it.<br />As you said,I also think there are such kinds of jobs now not only drawing pictures by own hands.<br /> Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-70350237274431868262015-12-17T13:55:58.774-05:002015-12-17T13:55:58.774-05:00Hello Kumi-san,
Another interesting article, I am...Hello Kumi-san,<br /><br />Another interesting article, I am not much of an artist, I do the occasional piece of computer graphics design. The internet and computers make a career in art much more accessible than it used to be.<br /><br />Here is the list of small issues found in the article:<br /><br />This line:<br />The one is this, he drew the Tamaire : it is one of the sports day's events, the children are divided in two groups called the red team and the white team, and compete how many cloth balls they can throw into the basket.<br /><br />Should be:<br />In the first picture he drew the Tamaire. Tamaire is one of the sports day events, the children are divided in two groups called the red team and the white team, and they compete to see how many cloth balls they can throw into the basket.<br /><br />This line:<br />This is an image photo of Tamaire.<br /><br />Should be:<br />This is an photo of the Tamaire.<br /><br />This line:<br />When I heard his word, I felt it would be his destiny.<br /><br />Should be:<br />When I heard his words, I felt it would be his destiny.<br /><br />This line:<br />But his parents disagree with his hope because it was costly though it would not be guaranteed the income.<br /><br />Should be:<br />But his parents disagreed with his hopes because it was costly and they thought it would not be a reliable source of income.<br /><br />This line:<br />They recommended to get a job as a company employee for a secure life.<br /><br />Should be:<br />They recommended he should get a job as a company employee for a secure life.<br /><br />This line:<br />But now his son have a dream which he used to have once.<br /><br />Should be:<br />But now his son has a dream which he used to have.Terry Wallworkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175573589082853160noreply@blogger.com