tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post7005904381972858795..comments2023-03-28T05:27:10.415-04:00Comments on An Ordinary Japanese Mom's Diary: What is the most important?Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-66008244589181695012016-01-30T02:19:40.545-05:002016-01-30T02:19:40.545-05:00Hello Terry.
I corrected them.
I appreciate that y...Hello Terry.<br />I corrected them.<br />I appreciate that you spent your precious time for me.<br /><br />Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04953459416346536609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8652020746892759821.post-20228814159525141132016-01-29T10:49:53.163-05:002016-01-29T10:49:53.163-05:00Hello Kumi-san,
Fun read. I always hated sports ...Hello Kumi-san,<br /><br />Fun read. I always hated sports activities when I was at school, luckily there were not many.<br /><br />Here is a list of some of the issues found in your article:<br /><br />This line:<br />After we came home, my son told me showing me a small piece of paper:<br /><br />Should be:<br />After we came home, my son showed me a small piece of paper and said:<br /><br />This line:<br />"I was in the 20th when I run for practise 2 days ago. I dropped one place."<br /><br />Should be:<br />"I was in 20th position when I ran for practise 2 days ago. I dropped one place."<br /><br />This line:<br />"But, look! Today's your time is 40 seconds faster than yesterday's! Isn't that something? I know marathon is really hard, but you did a great job!"<br /><br />Should be:<br />"But, look! Today your time is 40 seconds faster than yesterday's! Isn't that something? I know marathon is really hard, but you did a great job!"<br /><br />This line:<br />What's important is that you do your best and you are better than yourself than your were yesterday.<br /><br />Should be:<br />What's important is that you do your best and get better than you were (before/yesterday).Terry Wallworkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175573589082853160noreply@blogger.com