I was really glad to receive them.
When we went shopping at the supermarket, my 8-year-old son suggested my husband to give it to me.
I didn't notice that they bought them at the flower shop because I went to different places in the supermarket apart from them.
I am really happy to be a mother, thanks to you!
Thank you(^o^) for reading this article!
Hello Kumi-san,
ReplyDeleteI hope your Mother's Day was enjoyable and you were not overly busy and were able to relax a little.
The flowers look amazing. It sounds as if your son and husband are very good at planning surprises.
Here is a list of some of the issues found with the rest of the post:
This line:
I was really glad to receive it.
Should be:
I was really glad to receive them.
Reason: Usually when getting a gift of flowers you generally use "them" rather than "it". I am not sure as to why. Your sentence as far as I can tell is still grammatically correct.
This line:
When we went shopping to the supermarket, my 6-year-old son suggested my husband to give it to me.
Should be:
When we went shopping at/in the supermarket, my 6-year-old son suggested my husband should give them to me.
This line:
I didn't notice that they bought it at the flower shop because I went to different places in the supermarket apart from them.
Should be:
I didn't notice that they bought them at the flower shop because I went to different places in the supermarket and was apart from them.
This line:
I am really happy because I could be a mother thanks to you!
Should be:
I am really happy to be a mother, thanks to you!
Thank you always, Terry!
DeleteOpps! I found that I mistook my son's age!
I also corrected it.