We visited Lake Yamanaka to get on KABA which is an amphibious bus.
It drives through the forest at first, then dives into Lake Yamanaka.
After that, it goes around the lake as a ship.
When it was going to dive into the lake, the staff announced this lively.
"Wow!"
When the big splash happened the passengers broke out in cheers.
We were able to see the beautiful Mt.Fuji from KABA.
The staff quizzed the passengers about Lake Yamanaka and our family enjoyed answering them.
This is KABA.
It was a very big bus, but since it is so popular, it was fully booked and there was no vacant seat.
If you want to try it, you should book your seats first.
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Hello Kumi-san,
ReplyDeleteKaba sounds like a lot of fun. Did you have to wear life jackets. It would be an excellent vehicle to do some fishing from as well.
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We visited to Lake Yamanaka to get on KABA which is an amphibious bus.
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We visited Lake Yamanaka to get on KABA which is an amphibious bus.
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When it was going to dive into the lake, the staff announced lively.
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When it was going to dive into the lake, the staff announced this excitedly.
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The big splash broke out and cheers went up from the passengers.
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The big splash caused passengers to break out in cheers.
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When the big splash happened the passengers broke out in cheers.
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The staff offered passengers the quizzes related to Lake Yamanaka and our family enjoyed answering them.
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The staff quizzed the passengers about Lake Yamanaka and our family enjoyed answering them.
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It was a very big bus, but since it is so popular that it was fully booked and there was no vacant seat.
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It was a very big bus, but since it is so popular, it was fully booked and there were no vacant seats.
Hello Terry.
DeleteI didn't know "quiz" can use as a verb!
I learned something new.
Thank you so much!