2016/01/15

One more day

I asked my mother to come to my house and take care of my 7-year-old son yesterday because I needed to go to work.

I told my mom:

"It will be a hard day for you to spend with him all day. He has already had to stay home for four days. He finished reading comics, he didn't want to play with his toys anymore, he is tired of staying home. He will be frustrated again today."

When I came home around 5pm, my 5-year-old daughter ran to the entrance crying and my 7-year-old son was chasing her to try to hit her.

He was mad at her.

"What happened?"

According to my mother, they played "The Game of Life" together again.

Since my daughter won the game,  he got mad at her.

"I didn't want to lose her."

He said.

After that, my father came to our house to pick my mother up.

When they went home, I held my son and took him to outside of our house.

"It's cold!"

He clung to my neck.

It seemed to refresh him, he stopped being in bad mood.

My son and family need to put up with staying home one more day.

We will take him to the clinic to see the doctor tomorrow because we need a certificate of recovery from Infectious Disease to hand in to his school.

ONE MORE DAY!



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  1. Hello Kumi-san,

    It's seems that you and your parents had a stressful day. Sounds like the Game Of Life board game is a bad influence on your children. Still just one more day so hopefully things will not get much worse.

    Here is a list of some of the issues I found while reading the post:

    This line:
    I asked my mother to come home and take care of my 7-year-old son yesterday because I needed to go to work.

    Should be:
    I asked my mother to come to my house and take care of my 7-year-old son yesterday because I needed to go to work.

    This line:
    "It will be a hard day for you to spend with him all day. He has already needed to stay home for four days. He finished reading comics, he didn't want to play with his toys anymore, he is tired of staying home. He will be frustrated again today."

    Should be:
    "It will be a hard day for you to spend with him all day. He has already had to stay home for four days. He finished reading comics, he didn't want to play with his toys anymore, he is tired of staying home. He will be frustrated again today."

    This line:
    When I came home around 5pm, my 5-year-old daughter ran to the entrance with crying and my 7-year-old son was chasing her to try to hit her.

    Should be:
    When I came home around 5pm, my 5-year-old daughter ran to the entrance crying and my 7-year-old son was chasing her to try to hit her.

    This line:
    According to my mother, they played "The Game of Life" togeter again.

    Should be:
    According to my mother, they played "The Game of Life" together again.

    This line:
    When they went home, I hold my son and took him to outside of our house.

    Should be:
    When they went home, I held my son and took him outside of our house.

    This line:
    It seemed to make him refresh, he stopped being in bad mood.

    Should be:
    It seemed to refresh him, he stopped being in a bad mood.

    This line:
    We will take him to the clinic to see the doctor tomorrow because we need a the certificate of recovery from Infectious Disease to hand in his school.

    Should be:
    We will take him to the clinic to see the doctor tomorrow because we need a certificate of recovery from Infectious Disease to hand in (to/at) his school.

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    1. Hello Terry.
      I am always grateful to your help.

      The Game Of Life board is a fun game, I used to enjoy playing it very much.
      But it seemed to be too early for them.

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